Kat

Overall I think this is a good capture. I'm personally a little preferential to black and white nudes, somewhat recently delving into them myself. Fine choice of model and the posing works well. I like the framing along the right and top edges of the frame, but I personally would have left at least a sliver of frame along the left edge. Another option, though it would have had to occur during shooting as opposed to post production, would be to have the model pull her shoulder back far enough for a natural light fall-off to occur. I also think you could have taken somewhat better advantage of the full tonal range of black and white. You have an excellent base black, but the grey range seems somewhat flat with virtually no pure whites. If that was your intention - that's fine, it's your image, make it however you want. This is just my opinion, and a self-taught opinion at that.

~Mike